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Needing a better thesis statement
Include direct quotes instead of paraphrase
Numbers and solid facts
Follow counter claim in conclusion
Take out “this essay will”
Try to work on really taking control of each paragraph. Citing evidence and using some direct quotes and staying on the topic of the paragraphs topic sentence
I’ve added two articles if you wanna change the work cited i picked
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